Aur Bhi Doon

और भी दूँ
- रामावतार त्यागी (Ram Avtar Tyagi)

मन समर्पित, तन समर्पित
और यह जीवन समर्पित
चाहता हूँ देश की धरती, तुझे कुछ और भी दूँ

मॉं तुम्हारा ऋण बहुत है, मैं अकिंचन
किंतु इतना कर रहा, फिर भी निवेदन
थाल में लाऊँ सजाकर भाल में जब भी
कर दया स्वीकार लेना यह समर्पण

गान अर्पित, प्राण अर्पित
रक्त का कण-कण समर्पित
चाहता हूँ देश की धरती, तुझे कुछ और भी दूँ

मॉंज दो तलवार को, लाओ न देरी
बॉंध दो कसकर, कमर पर ढाल मेरी
भाल पर मल दो, चरण की धूल थोड़ी
शीश पर आशीष की छाया धनेरी

स्वप्न अर्पित, प्रश्न अर्पित
आयु का क्षण-क्षण समर्पित।
चाहता हूँ देश की धरती, तुझे कुछ और भी दूँ

तोड़ता हूँ मोह का बंधन, क्षमा दो
गॉंव मेरी, द्वार-घर मेरी, ऑंगन, क्षमा दो
आज सीधे हाथ में तलवार दे-दो
और बाऍं हाथ में ध्‍वज को थमा दो

सुमन अर्पित, चमन अर्पित
नीड़ का तृण-तृण समर्पित
चहता हूँ देश की धरती, तुझे कुछ और भी दूँ

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I jus love this poem! Good work!!

Aaj bhi yeh kavita ka path kar ke aankhon mein neer ki dhaar aa jaati hai :).. All time hit Cheers

Namaste Ji! Is Kavaita ko Padya roop main kaise Gaya Ja Sakata Hai? Dhanyawad. Kapil.

this is a very good poem indeed..............gaaane ke liye aap ko is me doobna padega. aaan baan shaan aur swabhimaan ki mashal kranti chetana ki agdayi ko naman hai kaal ke karal bhal jis pe tilik kiya us punya lahu ki lalai ko naman hai to jhansi rajya vansh ki kamai ko naman aur amar swaroo ki shanai ko naman hai... chidiya ki baaz se ladai ko naman rani lakshmi bai shoura tarunai ko naman hai

Any work related to our motherland is always excellent. This is a poem which divert our attention to our beloved India. Amazing to have less number of comments for this. Happy to get more light on it from every Indian in the world. We will rocks always. India is the great. It is in our heart and soul and we will ready to give our life if necessary for our motherland. Saare jahan se achha, Hindustan Hamara Hum Bulbule Hain iski, Yeh Gulsitan Hamara.

we need some people who think like this poem. so we can create real india. Vande Mataram.

thanks for posting ...this is one of my all time favourite poem!

This is one of my favorite poems. Many thanks for putting this up. Please keep adding more poems of Indian writers.

this is one of my favorite poem from my school time.....

ye ek khoj hai, ek sangharsh hai, ek vishwas hai, ek dil ki aawz, ek hindustan ki juban.

dude this poem, india, me, the nation, the people, the govt, the rules, our constitution, our policies....... WE ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love it........i

desh pe ar mitne walon ke liye ek utsaahwardhak kavita hai. ek bahut hi umda rachna jise padh kar ashk chalak aaye hain koro se

I have heard the first para in my college time in 1984-85 through an anchor of the republic day celebrations.I have also used this in my anchoring also. But I did not know name of the author. I am very happy that I got the whole poem while searching poem for project work of my son. Very good feeling about nation, but I think such devotion is missing nowadays. Now the devotion is concentrating only for once caste.

agar ye kavita padhne ke baad bhi desh ke liye tumhare khun me ubal na aaye to samajh lena tumhara jiwan bekar hai