Koshish Karne Walon Ki

कोशिश करने वालों की
- सोहन लाल द्विवेदी

(few people think that it is from सूर्यकांत त्रिपाठी "निराला" or हरिवंशराय बच्चन. But it has been clarified directly by Amitabh Bachchan ji in following msg - https://www.facebook.com/AmitabhBachchan/posts/1153934214640366)

लहरों से डर कर नौका पार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।

नन्हीं चींटी जब दाना लेकर चलती है,
चढ़ती दीवारों पर, सौ बार फिसलती है।
मन का विश्वास रगों में साहस भरता है,
चढ़कर गिरना, गिरकर चढ़ना न अखरता है।
आख़िर उसकी मेहनत बेकार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।

डुबकियां सिंधु में गोताखोर लगाता है,
जा जा कर खाली हाथ लौटकर आता है।
मिलते नहीं सहज ही मोती गहरे पानी में,
बढ़ता दुगना उत्साह इसी हैरानी में।
मुट्ठी उसकी खाली हर बार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।

असफलता एक चुनौती है, इसे स्वीकार करो,
क्या कमी रह गई, देखो और सुधार करो।
जब तक न सफल हो, नींद चैन को त्यागो तुम,
संघर्ष का मैदान छोड़ कर मत भागो तुम।
कुछ किये बिना ही जय जय कार नहीं होती,
कोशिश करने वालों की कभी हार नहीं होती।

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Regarding the confusion about the writer, there was this twitter conversation in July 2010 - http://twitter.com/SrBachchan/status/19327863853

  • By @RaiPoonam -- @SrBachchan http://www.prayogshala.com/poems/bachchan-koshish-karne-walon-ki.. sir dis poem is written by ur father or by shri Nirala ji..
  • Reply by @SrBachchan - @RaiPoonam written by babuji


    Later Amitabh ji, posted following message on twitter and facebook - https://www.facebook.com/AmitabhBachchan/posts/1153934214640366


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    Hi ! It is wrongl;y mentioned that it is written by Dr Harivansh Rai bachchan. This poem is written by Suryakant Tripathi Nirla, somehow all use net search for this and then use wrong name of Poet.

    This need to be corrected.
    Bhineet

    This poem is written by Harivanch Rai bachchan, and not Nirala. You may notice Nirala is more 'klishta' in his writings and more sensuous.

    Is there any poem in sanskrit or any ved available.

    if you can give me a funny poem now immediately. please

    Poet is Shri Harivanch Rai Bachchan

    Yes the poet is Harivansh Rai Bachhan

    @SrBachchan http://www.prayogshala.com/poems/bachchan-koshish-karne-walon-ki.. sir dis poem is written by ur father or by shri Nirala ji..
    41 minutes ago via web in reply to SrBachchan

    @RaiPoonam written by babuji ..
    18 minutes ago via web in reply to RaiPoonam

    wrong ur crazy it is by mr.bacchan

    this has been written by harivansh rai bachan for sure !!! and it is wonderful !

    I think it's written little bit different hope you can change, because i really love it !

    Who told you that it is written by someone called nirala and not by ShreeHarivansh Rai Bachan ?
    answer me just now.....
    we should not pass wrong comments
    NOTE IT ...........
    OTHER WISE YOU WHO AM I ?

    Dear friend, Niralaji (Sh. Suryakant Tripathi) was a great poet, not just someone called Nirala.

    Sure ,Nirala ji is a great poet.

    Saale tum abhi or pdho, utna bola kro, jitna pta hua kre.

    This poem is written by Shri Harivanshrai Bachchan and not by nirala ji..

    This poem is written by great poet Shri Harivanshrai Bachchan.Its Confirmed.

    The poet is Nirala

    This poem is written by great poet Dr. Harivanshrai Bachchan.Its Confirmed 100%

    pradeep prajapati 09911114175

    This is the poem of Suryakant Tripathi not of Hariwanshray Bachhan , because I was in search of this poem for last so many months in pune I go to Hindi Rashtrabhasha Pustakalaya where they give me all books of hariwanshray but I could not find there this poem. So it is definately of Suryakant Tripathi.

    A lot of thanks to this website for giving me the poem of which I am in search of more than a year.

    How idiotic of you. If you couldnt confirm this is of Harivansh Rai Bacchan then how can you be so sure that this is of Nirala. Make sure before you speak. May be they didnt give you one book in which it had this poem. May be you had it in the book but didnt look. Ask students of Class 10th in CBSE board. they must have it in their book and written by Harivansh Rai Bacchan. If you wanna say this is wrong then give some good reasoning n not a stupid example as you did before.

    Why u all are fighting on the writer of the poem.
    just keep patience and try again who is the original writer of this poem..
    Koshish karo pata karne ki kyunki koshish kabhi ..bekaar nahi jaati................

    Yesterday night I was searching this poem on net....
    I got it written with English characters...
    I wrote in Hindi fonts and posted on my blog...
    Today I was checking whether I can search on google.....
    .........and I got your post.......... :)

    the writer is definitely harivanshrai bachchan..no doubt about it..

    hey please clarify who is d original poet of dis poem......
    this is really very confusing.........

    This poem was in my class 7 Hindi textbook (15 years) ago.. I still have that text book, and it says the poet is Suryakant Tripathi "Nirala".. its is wrongly attributed to Harivanshrai Bacchan..

    very inspiring

    thanks for his poem . an excellent poem .

    it is a very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hi man how do you think poems??????????????????????????????

    IT IS A VERY nice poem,it is brilliant!!!!
    i am very thankful to this poem as it has helped me during my exams.

    Jisko confusion ho wo check kare.. I dont have any confusion.. poet is shri Harivanshray Bachhan.

    mind blowing

    mind driving

    dashing

    koshish karne walo ki har nahi hoti,bin kat chhant k bagon me bahar nahi hoti, himmat karne walo ki haar nahi hoti.

    very very motivating.......thanks 4 giving us such a inspirable thoughts

    Thanx a lot fr d poem.i got a lot of appreciation fr recytng dis poem. u rock!!!

    very motivating................................................good

    This poem is definitely from Dr. Harivansh Rai Bachhan, I have confirmed it from another site called Kavita Kosh.com which has a huge collection from most of the poets in India. Moreover I have read in many other places, and found this poem to be a creation of Mr. Bachhan

    I also agreed with Mr. Mukul's openion that this geet structured by one of the best heroes in hindi sahitya kala known as "Mr. Harivansh Rai Bacchan".

    i think the poem written by suryakanth tripathi niran

    abhik

    it is wrong it was written by suryakanth tripathi nalara

    awesome...................i think every one should something from it...........:) :) :)

    this is a good poem though,and it helped me a lot

    this poem may it be written by harivansh rai bachchan or famous hindi poet nirala ,this poem has nothing to do with the wrriters .it has to do with the thoughts of writers.
    a poem is one which covinces the readers heart and soul to the aim of the poem .this poem has targeted on the miserable lives of the students who find themselves as solo when the crowded.
    this is to synthesize them with the idea that "koshish karne walon ki haar nahi hoti,ravivaar se pehle somvaar nahe hoti.

    @SrBachchan http://www.prayogshala.com/poems/bachchan-koshish-karne-walon-ki.. sir dis poem is written by ur father or by shri Nirala ji..
    41 minutes ago via web in reply to SrBachchan

    @RaiPoonam written by babuji ..
    18 minutes ago via web in reply to RaiPoonam

    hi

    This poem is neither by Harivansh Rai bachchan nor Nirala,This poem is by Shri Sachinannd Singh "sameer"our hindi teacher and we have learnt this poem in school in Std 7.

    I think it is still in the book for std 7 maharashtra board.
    one of our favourite poems which we often recite to our kids...

    thank you though for putting it up I had been looking for it for a while to print and post it in our childrens room....

    Thank you

    This poem is wonderful. I thnk Prayog Shala for wonderful poems.

    Awesome!

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