हम पंछी उन्मुक्त गगन के
- ShivMangal Singh Suman (शिवमंगल सिंह सुमन)
हम पंछी उन्मुक्त गगन के
पिंजरबद्ध न गा पाऍंगे
कनक-तीलियों से टकराकर
पुलकित पंख टूट जाऍंगे ।
हम बहता जल पीनेवाले
मर जाऍंगे भूखे-प्यासे
कहीं भली है कटुक निबोरी
कनक-कटोरी की मैदा से ।
स्वर्ण-श्रृंखला के बंधन में
अपनी गति, उड़ान सब भूले
बस सपनों में देख रहे हैं
तरू की फुनगी पर के झूले ।
ऐसे थे अरमान कि उड़ते
नील गगन की सीमा पाने
लाल किरण-सी चोंच खोल
चुगते तारक-अनार के दाने ।
होती सीमाहीन क्षितिज से
इन पंखों की होड़ा-होड़ी
या तो क्षितिज मिलन बन जाता
या तनती सॉंसों की डोरी ।
नीड़ न दो, चाहे टहनी का
आश्रय छिन्न-भिन्न कर डालो
लेकिन पंख दिए हैं तो
आकुल उड़ान में विघ्न न डालो ।
Comments
Wondreful Text
This is a wonderful poem and if we reach the deepness of the text we would understand how wonderful it is.
Tarak mean
I am not able to understand the meaning of ; chugte tarak anar ke daane ;
Re: Tarak means
Tarak means 'stars'. Here the poet is saying in alankaarith style that if we were free, we would have flown to eat stars as if they were 'anar ke daane'. In another words, if we are free, we can do whatever our imagination can think. There is no bound on our 'udaan'.
with these words poet is
with these words poet is comparing the 'anar ke dane' with twinkling stars. bird want to have stars in the same way as they eat red and delicious pomegranate seeds (anar ke dane).
meanig
bhai chugte tarak anar ke dane means}tare ke jaise sundar-2 anar ke daane.......
Very good post, thanks a
Very good post, thanks a lot.
hi
i've loved this poem since school days....thanks for sharing..
thanks for the nicest poem
i m highly thankful for providing this poem which i m searching since my childhood which i just heard from my elder sister
dis poem is gr8
I really luv dis poem. Im a student and last year i studied it. It has not been able to come out of my head since then. It is GREAT!!! Specially the whole comparing this poem to the people who wanted freedom in India. Each line has a gr8 meaning and conveys so much!!! I wanna thank d person who put up d poem on d net, THANK U....
wow!!!
ye poem hindi vasant bhag-2 mein sankalit hai.
mein 7 mein hun and maine ye isi saal padi hai.........................
thanks
mind biowing poem.since i am studying i love so much this poem
Hum panchhi unmukt gagan
Hum panchhi unmukt gagan ke... Dis is such a meaningful poem with beautiful words.. Studied it in 7th std, 16 yrs ago, but it stuck somewhere in heart n mind... Sh. Shiv Mangal Suman is a fantastic poet..
i have read this before
we had this poem in our sixth standard (hindi utsav) and till now we all and my all classmates remember this poem.
we enjoy speaking it.
ham panchhi unmukat gagan k
ye kavita mujhe bachpan se hi bahut pasand he or aaj tak mujhe yad bhi he . mujhe is kavita me ladkiyo k sath ho rahe he
4th Std Hindi Poem
This 4 th std poem has always struck a chord with in me. Even after so many years I know it byheart and realise the real meaning with which the poet has written it
this is one of my fav.
this is one of my fav. poems....
Awesome Poem!
This is one of my fav poems which I remember from my school days.. Thanks for posting it! :)
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEM SINCE MY CHILDHOOD. AFTER READING IT ALL THE MEMORIES OF MY CHILDHOOD GOT AFRESH AS I WON 1ST PRIZE IN POEM RECITATION ON RECITING THIS POEM..........
Beautiful poem!! I loved it
Beautiful poem!! I loved it since my childhood...had it by heart. Thanks to our hindi sir, this peom made a great impression on my mind....lovely.
Very beautiful poem. what is
Very beautiful poem. what is meant by 'Katuk Nibori and kanak katori ki maida se' and 'Nid and aakul".
Katuk Nibori means the
Katuk Nibori means the bitter fruit of the Tree Neem and kanak katori ki maida arthaat sone ki katori me milne wala vo khana jo pinjre ke andar hai......
A Great poem really it's awesome!
What is meant by Katuk nibori and kanak katori
This is one of my Fav.
This is one of my Fav. poem.I remember it from my school days n i was searchig it since then.Thanx a lot for the post.
Hum panchi unmukt gagan k
Its ma fav poem , i read it in 4th standard sumwht 15 yrs ago and love it soooo much........i learnt this poem evn whn ma elder bro had it in his book.....
kutuk nibori means neem ki kadvi nibori n kanak katori means golden bowl....the birds say that its far better to to b free n hav those bitter niboli than to hav grains in a golden bowl inside the cage....
nice to catch other ppl who love this poem
Understanding the poem
I didn't understand the poem and its meaning. Please say the meaning of the poem!!!
budhu or fool u r both of
budhu or fool u r both of them
i hate comments of u all
i hate comments of u all
very good poem :P it is in
very good poem :P
it is in my school book of hindi
ha ha ha
kitna baakwas poem hai :P
kitna baakwas poem hai :P
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