NA WAFAA GAIRON SE MILI , NA WAFA APNON SE ,, ZINDAGI GUJAR DI HUMNE TOOTE HUE SAPNON SE !!!
Mrinal
06 Aug 10
TO know who has written this poem- (abt MANGAL PANDEY) "tha sattavan ka punya sal ,tab lagi desh mein mahajwal sabne prano ka moh chodd mamta maya ke jaal tod kasli thi kati mein talwaarein, kehte the aao lalkaarein andar se kaale goro ko ghar mein baste un choro ko........."
PLz plz help me ...i am in a hurry
Trishla Rana
20 Sep 08
Although I have read so many writters in hindi and urdu.I can say SAHIR LUDHIYANVI,NEERAJ,FAIZ AHMAD "FAIZ" DUSHYANT KUMAR have the originality in their poems rather can say concept or ideas.I am sharing for the period from 1960 to till date and most of other famous poets seem to change thier words and phrase and new poem given to society.By their mode of presentation or links they became famous. Some how i read Kavi Deepak Sharma and his creation FALAKDIPTI and MANZAR and observed the same feeling and new creative mind as the above mentioned poet had.What a collection.........mind blowing.... please read positively if you can .Please make it note that in future he will be the next famous poet all over the world .God bless him long life and health so that can serve the society for a long period.His Another Creation i am just mentioning for you readers.
साँस जाने बोझ कैसे जीवन का ढोती रही नयन बिन अश्रु रहे पर ज़िन्दगी रोती रही
एक नाज़ुक ख्वाब का अंजाम कुछ ऐसा हुआ मैं तड़पता रहा इधर वो उस तरफ़ रोती रही
भूख , आंसू और गम ने उम्र तक पीछा किया मेहनत के रुख पर ज़र्दियाँ , तन पर फटी धोती रही
उस महल के बिस्तरे पे सोते रहे कुत्ते , बिल्लियाँ धूप में पिछवाडे एक बच्ची छोटी सोती रही
तंग आकर मुफलिसी मन खुदखुशी कर की मगर दो गज कफ़न को लाश उसकी बाट जोती रही
'दीपक' बशर की ख्वाहिशों का कद इतना बढ गया ख्वाहिशों की भीड़ में कहीं ज़िन्दगी खोती रही
Manish Lal
21 Feb 09
Sir, I have heard the line of the poem like this:- Phool Panchi Baney kit patang, Loo Manushya Aaj se bolega, bhed shabhi ka kholega . sir plz help to know that who has written this poem and also help me to present this poem in your web site.
Manish
27 Feb 09
Sir, I have heard the line of the poem like this:- Phool Panchi Baney kit patang, Loo Manushya Aaj se bolega, bhed shabhi ka kholega . This poem might be written by Gopal Singh Nepali will you plz provide me this poem on net
Akanksha
29 Jul 08
I Discovered Pravasi Hindi Poetry written by a NRI Hindi Poet, Dr. Sudha Om Dhingra,on www.vibhom.com. Really love the Indian Overseas Hindi Poetry. It got full Kavita Sangrah on Pravasi Kavita, Hindi Literature, Poetry and Hindi Books. The Poet is NRI Hindi Author-cum-Writer, wrote lots of Hindi Poems and Hindi Books.
ZINDAGI GUJAR DI HUMNE TOOTE HUE SAPNON SE !!!
"tha sattavan ka punya sal ,tab lagi desh mein mahajwal
sabne prano ka moh chodd mamta maya ke jaal tod
kasli thi kati mein talwaarein, kehte the aao lalkaarein
andar se kaale goro ko ghar mein baste un choro ko........."
PLz plz help me ...i am in a hurry
please read positively if you can .Please make it note that in future he will be the next famous poet all over the world .God bless him long life and health so that can serve the society for a long period.His Another Creation i am just mentioning for you readers.
साँस जाने बोझ कैसे जीवन का ढोती रही
नयन बिन अश्रु रहे पर ज़िन्दगी रोती रही
एक नाज़ुक ख्वाब का अंजाम कुछ ऐसा हुआ
मैं तड़पता रहा इधर वो उस तरफ़ रोती रही
भूख , आंसू और गम ने उम्र तक पीछा किया
मेहनत के रुख पर ज़र्दियाँ , तन पर फटी धोती रही
उस महल के बिस्तरे पे सोते रहे कुत्ते , बिल्लियाँ
धूप में पिछवाडे एक बच्ची छोटी सोती रही
तंग आकर मुफलिसी मन खुदखुशी कर की मगर
दो गज कफ़न को लाश उसकी बाट जोती रही
'दीपक' बशर की ख्वाहिशों का कद इतना बढ गया
ख्वाहिशों की भीड़ में कहीं ज़िन्दगी खोती रही
I have heard the line of the poem like this:-
Phool Panchi Baney kit patang, Loo Manushya Aaj se bolega, bhed shabhi ka kholega .
sir plz help to know that who has written this poem and also help me to present this poem in your web site.
I have heard the line of the poem like this:-
Phool Panchi Baney kit patang, Loo Manushya Aaj se bolega, bhed shabhi ka kholega .
This poem might be written by Gopal Singh Nepali will you plz provide me this poem on net